Very powerful, you put a lot of emotion and soul into that. I really admire it! I like the point of view chosen, it made the reader feel connected and it put us their shoes; I couldn't help but compare my story to theirs. I like seeing perspectives and different angles, you really covered that well. I felt sympathy and even a bit of anger towards the point of view of the person talking to her. I like that it stepped into a family life and opened up. Stories like this one truely inspire me to speak my mind. Well written~